I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 Student and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a com
I really like your poem Drew.My favourite line is about Coca Cola.You've set the pictures out evenly and the text fits neatly inside. Next time you could use a full stop at the end of each sentence.It will make your work look neater. Thanks for sharing.😳
What a neat poem Drew. It is great to see that you have got your poem completed and you have thought carefully about your layout and the pictures you have used.
I really like your poem Drew.My favourite line is about Coca Cola.You've set the pictures out evenly and the text fits neatly inside.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could use a full stop at the end of each sentence.It will make your work look neater.
Thanks for sharing.😳
What a neat poem Drew. It is great to see that you have got your poem completed and you have thought carefully about your layout and the pictures you have used.
ReplyDeleteThat's absolutely fantastic poetry Drew. I'm so super proud of you!
ReplyDeleteHi Drew.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see your next blog post.
Have a great holiday and keep dry.