W.A.L.T write an interesting first sentence to hook our reader my first sentence was
The boy was playing his video games. Mum came home she was holding a big box.
This is my new sentence.
Pew pew pew ping ping ping! The dark haired boy was playing his video games.
please leave me a comment blow
I like how you improved the sentence Drew.I am curious to know what was in the box.What do you think it is?.
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