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Monday, February 22, 2021

Persuasive Writing Drew


We are learning to write persuasive arguments.

Scooting at school


I think we should have scooting at school.


Firstly, Because it makes you fit.  Its good exercise.


Secondly. It is fun. Because you can do tail whips, and bri whips.

  

Thirdly ,      More things to do at school. Kids arn’t bored.


 We should build a scooter track very soon at Hornby Primary school.



4 comments:

  1. I definitely agree with you Drew! It is very good exercise. And everybody loves scootering even mum❤

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  2. You've given some great ideas and reasons Drew.
    I agree with all of your sentences,especially the one about kids getting bored.I have seen a quite a few kids sitting down and I think that if there was something they enjoyed doing,then they'd be doing that.

    Who do you think could watch the kids so there are no arguments?.

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  3. Hello Drew.
    Maybe next time you reply to me,you could ask me a question.I will only be too happy to reply.
    Have a great week.

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