Once upon a time I was in a forest and I was Chased by a killer clown and then I saw this big tree and it talk to me and it said I will protect you and then he pushed the killer clown away with his powerful Hulk smash hands The Rock came to pratect me and Then the killer clown gang came And the big tree man smashed them with his Hulk smash hands and then we lived happily ever after
Hi Drew I like your writing it's good, but you don't full stops or comma in you writing. Your writing feel's like chit chat, what the teacher read's to everybody.But your writing is good.
ReplyDeleteGood job.