The lighthouse broke down and the villagers saved the day.
“On Sunday I was in the lighthouse and the villagers were being really noisy, I was really annoyed. Said Mr Tom. He shut the window and the lights went out. I saw a ship and I dropped the light and I was horrified that the ship would crash.
I had an idea then I ran down the stairs and I opened the door and the villagers were all outside with their lanterns. The villagers were surrounding the lighthouse. The shi oveded the lighthouse the end
You've got some great ideas Drew.I like that you gave the lighthouse keeper a name and you explained what the problem was.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could re-read your work before posting just to make sure that it makes sense and when you put, The End,you can have that on another line or put a full stop to show the end of the last sentence.